Reflections

by Gem   May 17, 2007


Beautiful reflections
Flickering in sunlight
Creating a sense of peace
On an otherwise hectic day

Willow trees dip their tresses
In water of indigo blue
Swaying side to side
In a hypnotising fashion

Feelings of melancholy drift
Away on a pleasant breeze
Leaving liberty for pleasure
To achieve it's place

Delicate puffs of clouds
Floating lazily past
Complimenting these trickling
Sounds of gliding water

Such beautiful reflections
Flickering in moonlight
Creating a sense of serenity
That resides in us all

*Gem*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This was beautiful and very serene. The great descritions made for wonderful imagery. Not to mention the vocab in this one was outstanding. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    This was definitely an outstanding piece of work. Excellent Job and beautiful imagery.

    Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    "Willow trees dip their tresses
    In water of indigo blue
    Swaying side to side
    In a hypnotising fashion"

    I could picture that in my mind so perfectly, almost like a scene out of the movie My Girl lol Fantastic poem with amazing imagery. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Such serene ambiance induces a sense of respite in my -chaotic- mind. (Coughs.) This poem is perfectly admiring. I specially adore the imagery you had created and the simplicity in substance and style. Bravo! Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Willow trees dip their tresses
    In water of indigo blue
    Swaying side to side
    In a hypnotising fashion.

    Wow...5/5. All the best.

    Ray Blue

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