The hypocrites you talk about

by Finalgravedigger   May 19, 2007


Everyones fake,
wearing mask,
Halloweens 24-7
aint life a blast

Everyones evil,
cowards inside
just wanting to look good on the outside.

So they do what they believe's right,
they fight
and even die

Talking the talk
walking the walk
expressing themselves is all they want.

They have their own opinions
society wont bring them down
these are the hypocrites you talk about.

PLease vote and comment.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This is incredibly well done. The rhyming scheme was a little off but I definitely think this was an excellent poem. I can tell you were really feeling what you wrote. Great job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Madelaine

    Hey thats really good.. I get what ya mean! I hate ppl like that!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rami

    I really like this one. It does really describe how people really are... always so fake.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    You're right, the world's full with that kind of people. Well written poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Maddyxxx

    Sweet!! good work, 5/5. :)