Fatal Kiss

by isabel   May 19, 2007


See her eyes, they're sweet and blue
Hear her voice, with sweetness, too
Look at her heart, feel the pain
Look at her mind, she's insane

Find the blooded tears she shed
Hear the cruel words he said
Blood has remained in her mind
The day she left life behind

After death, she took the phone
Gladly, now, he was alone
He smiled and came, without a word
Unready to face vampire's world

One cold smile, a fatal kiss
Forever took his life of bliss
The vampire has revenged her tears
The insane girl forever cheers

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  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Wow, the concept to this one was astonishing! It had me trapped the whole time. Your flow and word choice were great. And it was put together beautifully from start to finish! I liked the beginning... The concept of writing you used was unique and appealing to the eyes...

    5/5 for sure!

  • 18 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Not really my kind of poem. but it was a good one!
    Its very easy to read with great flow and its strong imagery really helps to understand and read through. Although i dont normally like these kinds of poems this one still kept me interested from beginning to end
    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    :D
    This is probably the best poem I've read today. And, I think it's more because it has the revenge in it. It's something nine out of ten people want on the person who hurt them or broke their heart. It's just easy to relate to with a great flow and amazing emotion. :]

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Spirit

    The middle was a bit shaky but ot was still really good.

    quick question did HE turn her or someone else. if it was someone else then why seek revenge on HIM? if it was HIM how would she turn HIM?

    ok so not so quick.
    good poem lovely read
    (~:Sam Mayo:~)

  • 18 years ago

    by lish

    This definately deserves to go into my favourites, this poem again is brilliantly written, well done, xxo

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