Sloth

by Finalgravedigger   May 25, 2007


Lazy to the core, don't care anymore.
Laying there today, emotions,life
just go away.

Wasting time, not doing anything right
opportunities go by, losing everything
important in life.

Meaningless, just there, breathing but
might as well be air.
For you wasted life, you wasted time.

This is your sin
This is your crime.

( little messy, not one of my best but plz vote and comment)

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  • 16 years ago

    by DarkMurderr

    Thank you for your comment ^^ I really like your poems =) I love this one little bit more 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    You really don't like sloths do you... =P. Kidding, I love it. It can be interpreted in lots of ways.

    Great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Yeah a feeling of someone who is disappointed in what life brings and who lose all his hopes! I liked this one...Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I agree with glenn, I think you can improve this. Nice flow to it, and pretty short. I think I know what the message in this but not for sure.

  • 16 years ago

    by glenn

    I liked it alot but i think it might be able to be improved upon...

    -glenn

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