In a cold night in September (Sad memories)

by isabel   May 25, 2007


In a cold night in September
It's so painful to remember
I sat, looking at the past

Leaves falling into the ground
The tears I shed, without a sound
Only sad memories last

Stars remind me of my loss
In my mind only a cross
Memories of what they said

Never erased the pain inside
Lost my life through suicide
I am now one of the dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by tyanna

    Aww..really great job!! The only thing is that
    " leaves falling INTO the ground" Should have been "leaves falling ONTO the ground"
    5/5
    Tyanna

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Really well written, excellent word choice and the flow was good,deep emtion strong and clear. altogather a good write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aw this is sad :( I like the way you rhymed some lines good job! flow was good for me! keep writing! and thanks for the comment. 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Really nice poem with a strong flow n wordings. U simply deserve 5/5.
    with love
    Fsams

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