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by Dee   May 26, 2007


I love you with every bit of my heart and soul.
when ever I'm around you, you seem to make me whole.

I see you almost every day.
yet when you go i wish you would stay.

you love me, care for, keep me in line.
and its so hard to believe that your all mine.

its amazing that it could end out this way
i hope its always like this and you never go away

i no we love each other with all our heart?
but there still are things that could tear us apart?

all i can hope is that it will all stay right.
and at night I'll go to bed and hold you tight.

we've had our ups, our downs, laughter out tears,
i know i could stay with you for all my years.

still to this day every time we speak
i cant help the fact that my legs go weak

When I'm with you i get a feeling of completeness
but if you ever left could i handle the weakness

i know right now that you your mine times gone fast
i just we could make promise that we will last

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Excellent job with this poem, the words were chosen nicely and the flow was good too. There's no better feeling then loving somebody so much while knowing they feel the same about you. Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent job!...beautifullyt penned words and the flow was also kind of god an it was filled with love!
    5/5
    =)
    Kp it up!

    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Again so romanting i loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    EXCELLENT! The poem is beautifully written with nice rhyming words. There was lil forced rhyme at the end of the poem I guess but u deserve 5/5

    With love
    Fsams

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