by Dee Jul 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Won't you please be with me |
by ourlilsecret
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I love it!!lol |
by oddi tea
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Wonderful, and great rhyme scheme! |
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What a nice poem.... i love it .. |
by BlueDreams
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What a emotions penned you portrait here, so heartfelt yet writing well within beautiful emotions... "Love says no with empathy and great compassion. Love is firm, but when needed it must be tender." Beautiful done! |
by Vanessa
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The emotion is strong and clear, the flow is great, the word choice is good, and the message is clear. Well written, Stepping up the vocab could improve the power a bit. but other than that excellent job |