My Man

by Dee   Jul 21, 2007


Won't you please be with me
I want you for eternity
Hold me in your tender arms
Make me laugh with childish charms
Look deeply into my soul
Tell me that you'll never let go
Seduce with your every move
Sweep me off my feet to feel the groove
Show me it all when i look in your eyes
Let it out with no disguise
Listen to me as i talk
Hold my hand as we walk
Sit with me as i lay in bed
Tell me whats going on in your head
When i lay on your lap play with my hair
Give me a kiss tell me you'll always be there
As i cry tell me it will all be OK
Then hold me tight thats all you need to say
I never want this feeling to end
Forever and always more than a friend
I want to be your love, your wife
Tell me there is room in your life

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  • 16 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    I love it!!lol
    Great Job =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Wonderful, and great rhyme scheme!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    What a nice poem.... i love it ..

    good job :D

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    What a emotions penned you portrait here, so heartfelt yet writing well within beautiful emotions... "Love says no with empathy and great compassion. Love is firm, but when needed it must be tender." Beautiful done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The emotion is strong and clear, the flow is great, the word choice is good, and the message is clear. Well written, Stepping up the vocab could improve the power a bit. but other than that excellent job

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