Hate re-done

by Dee   Jun 24, 2007


I hate the way you make me feel
and all the things you do
The way your always on my mind
and the way i still love you

I have no self control
in the way you make me feel
I don't know whats going on
Or if this all is real

I know i still love you
its crazy and insane
i want to be with you
but it causes to much pain

the way you make we feel
Eats away inside
i hate you and i love you
it changes with the tide

*This is kinda a re-do of hate

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffaney

    I love this one ur a great writer

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Great job.. the simplicity and the emotions were great although the ending just suddenly went off a bit. but anyway, still like this one..Keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I usually don't read love poetry, but I really like this one, cause I can relate to the feelings that you're describing.
    Good job, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i felt this way before. i thought it was great, honesty was the way to go. 5/5

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