My Life

by Dee   Jun 4, 2007


I was born in '88 Broken Hill, Australia
Mum had 7 kids I'm the 3rd of non failure

Grew up, got kicked out, had to find a place to stay
Packed my bags, took my things, i was on my way

Hugged the kids, said goodbye, "I'll call you soon"
Walked down the hall, took one last look at my room

Looked at mum, avoided him, tears in my eyes
She looks away, he's a prick, she believes all his lies

Thinking, wondering, trying to work out why
I give up, break down, sit in the gutter to cry

Get up, phone a friend, tell her whats going on
She says just wait there, don't worry, i wont be long

Call my dad try to explain i need a place, a home
I get told "live with me,you cant be on the street alone"

Nineteen hours on train, bored out of my mind
The lady sitting next to me smells like Orange rind

Off the train, theres my dad, hope he doesn't live to far
Says hello, grabs my stuff, we walk, then get in his car

We get there, i thank him, I'm going to be fine
See my room, close there door, don't stuff up this time

11 moths later

Had a fight, out again, where am i going to go?
grab my phone, call my sister, maybe she'll know

On the move, 5 places in 3 months, i want to settle down
look on the net, to find a home, call the places i found

Phone rings, Pick it up, its the refuge, yes hello
can you help me? can i live there? i have nowhere to go

move in, new house, six others live here
I'm the only girl, no sex, lets make that clear

one more chance, this is it, here it goes
i better no stuff up, well who knows

6 months latter move out stuff up move back in
had to many fights, some i didn't win

3 months later

brother calls me, has a house, do i want to live with him
OK, yes i do, when can i move in?

3months later, I'm still here,happy as can be
and all I'm doing is just being me

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  • 16 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Thats realy good and great flow i feel bad that u got kicked out if i got kicked pout i would have no where to go so ur lucky

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww wow, thats really good. sounds like you have had a lot to deal with and i admire you a lot and im glad i have read your writing and will continue to do so. im glad you settled down at last you seem like a very strong and very talented person xxxxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Out of all the poems I have read of yours this seems to be your best in message and form I enjoyed this alot and the story line was well done congrads greaat job Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was amazing, It had me interested from the very straight expecially since I read "broken Hill" seeing as I live in australia I knew where that is. This poem held an emotional story which was portrayed beautifully with a sweet eneding. I liked the structure of the two line stanzas it made this poem look neat and effective. The ryhme was good and the flow flawless. Well done on an exceptional poem~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This was a very strong emotional poem, yet very to the point. I loved the rhythm and flow of it all. Every line was really well written. I loved how there was so much pain in one poem and then in the end you were able to bring it together to create a happy ending, and one that actually hits you and makes you think wow...! Good job and keep up the amazing work

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