Miss you

by Dee   May 27, 2007


I wish i never left,
because my love will never end
i wish i was still with you and
didn't walk around that bend

i i remember all those times,
I'd wake up next to you
you'd tell me you love me,
you'd tell me you were true

I remember a time,
a time when when i was sick
you came and held my tight,
you came to me so quick

i remember how we drank,
the time i had that fight.
and when i got told to leave,
you came with me that night .

i wish i never left,
it was something i had to do
don't get me wrong
I'm still in love with you

when they kicked me out
you found me a place to stay
you packed my bags, took me there
and visited me everyday

i saw you every day
then maybe every week
i now see you every month
and i feel so weak

i call you all the time
every day and night
you put up with me
and we never fight

i used to think i couldn't live
with out you by my side
if you weren't there i would
run to our room and hide

i miss the days we had
the love we used to share
when ever i was with you
i didn't seem to care

but as we slowly drift apart
I'll get through it I'll be ok
theres a place in my heart for you
and forever it will stay

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Amazing it all coming straight from the heart. It's like the reader is living also through it all while just reading it.. Beautiful write. It's sad how it ended.
    Keep up the amazing work!:)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    My friend. the true feelings of love shine from your poem. that realy touched my heart. it is so good that you wrote such a lovely poem. i loved your work and i impressed i will must give you 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sian

    Very heart filled, its a magnificent peice of poetry. You should publish. Its really really great!

    5/5 ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful peice...very beautiful...filled with emotions...very powerful work...deep n heartfelt..n the repetition gave a good effect to the emotions portrayed..
    =)
    5/5!
    Good work..kp writing!
    xxPoojaxx

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