Unconditional love

by ~*SugarCube*~   May 29, 2007


You look past my imperfections, you stick by my side.
Unconditional love, is what you provide.
You're a wonderful caring man, my heart you surely touched.
I can't imagine being without you, I love you so much.

We connect on so many levels, in so many ways.
We never believed when someone said "it's just a phase"
You always keep me going when I'm about to fall apart.
Your love is never ending, you'll always be #1 in my heart.

Meeting you was a dream come true.
Two years we're stayed strong now, many more to come.
I know we're still young, but everything feels so right.
You put a smile on my face, you make everyday a delight.

You've seen me at my worst and you've seen me at my best.
To have someone like you in my life, I know I'm blessed.
Despite my imperfections, you offered me your protection.
You never let me fall, you helped me get in the right direction.

You taught me how to become more comfortable in my own skin.
You never let me doubt myself, you helped my find the strength within.
I want to thank you for always being there by my side.
Thank you for giving me the unconditional love you provide.

~Chelsea~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, this was good hunny. Okay, first of all. The flow was a bit off throughout the poem. Either the rhyme felt forced or the lines did not have the same amount of syllables roughly and this made it sound a bit off. Other than that, the descriptions were good and I could see how much you love this person. My only other suggestion is to break away from the cliche of love and try to explain it in a different way. 4/5 though, nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Its romanting that was great work take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    U stole my username :[. nice poem though. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The word choice was simple and yet effective, the emtion was stong yet clear, and the flow was great. you did an excellent job. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    'Unconditional love, is what you provide.' < a bit short.

    same with. 'Meeting you was a dream come true.'

    other than those two lines it's an amazing poem, and i love it. great job, sweetie!