by ~*SugarCube*~ May 28, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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Lurking around every corner, she's overpowered by dark. |
by Marc Ortiz
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It was a great poem! I like the way you rhymed some lines! good job. And the way you repeated the 1st stanza making it the ending is really good! excellent work! keep it up. |
by Boy
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There was no one but herself to blame. |
by Vanessa
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The repeation at the first and the last of the poem really made it exceptional, the flow was good, only off in one or two places, and the wording was marverlous, simple brillant, the emtion was strong and clear, You did an excellent job on this. Keep up the good work 5/5 |
by Teria
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'Frigid fingers griping her helpless heart. |
by Brittany C
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Interesting poem. I liked it. Another 5/5 |