by Riz Jun 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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I'm sorry |
by Goran Rahim
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Another great poem by a great poet, again with this great poem you have shown your great talent. |
by Marc Ortiz
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Well this is a great poem.. You even dedicated it to your grandpa.. It's really hard to lose someone in our life.. |
by Cella Bella
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There's a word missing here lol, "But I guess did", but that is all I see wrong with this poem. Another heartfelt and beautifully written poem. 5/5 |
by Angela
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Awwww... beautiful poem.. so heart felt.. |
by JaMeS
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Dont be sorry people deal with things in different ways its not about the emotion you show others and what is shown on the outside its more the memories you have and the feelings within...really good writing keep it up :) |