Take Advantage of Me.

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Jun 8, 2007


History is repeating it's self,
But I'm far to weak to stop it.
Even if I tried to
Who would believe me this time.
Now you can go as far as you want
I won't tell a soul
I couldn't bare the thought
Not this time,
For I would rather die than tell the things you have done to me.

Before you know it I'll be tempting death again.
Who will you hurt next?
A person can only handle so much;
I'm giving up.
No one cares.
Soon I won't either.

So take advantage of me.
No one will stand up for me.
What rights do I have, just a child.
No one cares what I become.
It's a world you fight for yourself.
But I'm stopping
I'm tired of fighting.
I'm tired of trying.

I'm becoming numb,
Your the reason I can't let go.
Or if i do I'll feel everything you've done to me
The things you still do.
The things no one understands.
She said be the survivor not the victim
I'm neither the survivor nor the victim,
I'm just a blur of nothingness
fading, and in the blink of an eye
I'll just be a memory.

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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Sad

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I liked it. it was very deep yet some of it was venting. i give you a def 5 amazingly written and thought of piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    You've written, yet again, a huge emotional rant. Nicely written, nevertheless. Most of my points were already covered by the reviewers above me; so I won't bother repeating them. :) I hope everything will work out for you sooner or later. All the best and take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    That was amazing def 5/5
    nobody deserves this!

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    Hey..i do love the poem..very deep and emotional. it's a great write.
    this line however:
    <It's a world you fight for yourself.>
    i think need to be changed for gramatic reasons..to something like: In this world you fight for yourself

    And, yes, the ending is a bit hard to follow.

    I'm becoming numb,
    Your the reason I can't left go. [LET instead of LEFT]]
    If I do I'll feel these things you have done to me. [this line also i think need to be changed..maybe something like: Or if i do I'll feel everything you've done to me]
    The things you still do.
    The things no one understands.
    She said be the survivor not the victim [i love this line =)]
    I'm not the survivor nor the victim,
    I'm just a blur of nothingness
    fading, and in the blink of an eye [for these three lines i like the suggestion above: But i am neither the survivor, nor the victim
    I am quickly fading into a blur of nothingness
    and in a blink of an eye
    I'll just be a memory. [i like this better as: I'll be just a memory.]

    alright so just make a few changes so it fllows better. but otherwise the poem is incredible..i love the message it has. great job! =)

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