Could She Ever Possiably Understand?

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Jul 6, 2007

She wants to understand me,
But there's still so many things I keep back.
I'm scared to trust her.
Maybe she'll leave,
Like they all do.
Maybe she won't want me either.
Who would?

I've done it all alone before;
I can do it again.
It was too good to be true to even think
That someone would help me.
Someone like me?

I'm just turning back to the way I was.
I can't stop myself.
I didn't die before,
I'm sure I can stay alive this time,
What does it matter, anyway?

I'm just running from everyone,
Because I have lost what let me survive,
She's taking it away from me,
She jumped in like I needed help,
When all I ever wanted was to be alone.

Soon she'll forget about me,
Day by day.
Until I'm just a memory.


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  • Nice one

  • 12 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Again, I wasn't so keen on the structure but you made up for it b showing the emotions portrayed into this which seemed to have been written in deep thought. Simple but effective. I liked how you talked about trust, it seems as though people always leave which is what your trying to state. Good effot.~mel

  • 12 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved it, omg it was awesome. the way you structured it was great, the words you used were awesome and overall just amazing. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Debbie

    This piece was almost akin to a Monologue, I believed. Going on about whether to trust the person or not created a huge confusion in the subject's heart. I quite liked it, because it gave me a glimpse of a troubled individual's thoughts and feelings...touchy...poignant...insightful...

    Nice one.