I Was Disappointed

by Goran Rahim   Jun 16, 2007


With the hope of
Congratulating you in your happy moment
To share your happiness,
With the hope of
Feeling the smile of your cheerfulness.

Happily I got up
I dialed your phone number
Happily I called you.
It rang, I waited
It rang, I waited
It rang, I kept waiting
Waiting for a response from you.

Then
I was disappointed
When rather than your tender voice
A different voice said
"Please leave your message for ..............."
I hung up with a faded hope.

Still, I don't know
Did you ignore it knowing it was me?
Or
You didn't think
It was necessary?

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  • 16 years ago

    by christina

    I really do like this poem i also too hope that he/she didn't pick up on prupose.Well keep righting you are a great writer 5/5 job well done :) goodbye please do "Now Its ur turn"

  • 16 years ago

    by blueknight

    I cant say anything ... just great 5/5 keep your works and stay your heart as lovingly as what you are lol....

    Gene Ross

  • 16 years ago

    by NeroB00

    It was nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Great poem i quite enjoyed reading it i will continue reading your stuff u are real talented o and thanx for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittini

    I really like it think its really easy to connect to! theres nothing else i can really say because this is a different style i have never seen so i thought it was really good!

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