I love...

by Lozbi   Jun 17, 2007


I love the way you look at me
i love the way you stare
i love the way you touch me
i love the way you care
i love the way your nose touches mine
i love the way you hug me tight
i love the way you kiss my lips
i love the way it feels so right
but most of all
i love the way you hold me close
and whisper
i love you...

By Loren McCormack

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Hey, great poem. I really liked it alot though I be sure why. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    It's really beautiful, and I can imagine the experiance; it really puts me in the moment.

    Great work Loren,

    Kindly yours,
    ~Richi~

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Hey, I already commented this one but my comment sucked! lol so here ya go...

    The flow was really good. It was the perfect love poem. What better way to express your love then saying everything you love about a person? lol it was FABULOUS! lol great JOB! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow such strong feelings of love well writtn great flow, and excellent word choice 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Lovely. Emotions are well expressed and to the point. Short and sweet. Good job.
    Alex

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