TRUE LOVE THEN, NOW AND FOREVER...

by Lozbi   Jun 19, 2007


I wrote this poem in english class sumtime in 2006.. i had 2 rite a poem.. these feelingz arent mine.. but r inspired by a good friend ov mine..

TRUE LOVE THEN, NOW AND FOREVER...

she looked up ahead
and there she saw
a cheerful face
and she wanted more

from that day on
she knew he was the one
she will always love him
even without the happy sun

the time they spent together
they cherished so much
it's like it was only them
and no one could get in touch

she thought it might
be just another fling
but she knew it wasnt
when he handed her that ring

he was the one
she wanted to keep
forever in her heart
even now, when shes alseep...

By Loren McCormack

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  • 18 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Good poem really good

  • 18 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    Cute, i love this one.
    <3

  • 18 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Mm.. i like the ending, its so peaceful.

    i love the whole thing.

    5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by So Wrong its Right

    If this was written as an assignment, it deserves an A. i love it when i am bored in a class and then i just start writing. usually they aren't so good at first, but they get better. excellent work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hebe

    Full emotion.
    Nice written.
    I enjoyed reading it.

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