My everything

by Jade Rossiter   Jun 19, 2007


Theres stuff that you don't know, stuff that i can't share,

things that Ive done that could hurt you when i didn't care,

But when you left me baby i got into a mess, it took a while to realize that what i had was best.

I never really noticed until you and i were through, that i could have hurt you baby if you only knew.

I neglected what i had i was so misunderstood, i was the best of compulsive lier's, I'd go back if i could.

But know it is too late, if i only knew, the one i really wanted was Danny, it was you.

You're just a memory know, maybe one day you will see, i never meant to hurt you you're everything to me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Really well written, like i said don't get hung up too much on critics* the emotion, the talent and sheer power of language is there!
    once again a fab write!

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    This poem is excellent i hope to read more from you in the future :) ur poems have true emotions in them and u describe them well xx

  • 16 years ago

    by jason

    Hmm for someone who jsut started this was like really good... it sounds like its a song with the flow and everything keep it up = ] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "You're just a memory know, maybe one day you will see, i never meant to hurt you you're everything to me."

    I liked the last line a lot, it was very poignant and really touched the heart.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

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