Just a child x

by Jade Rossiter   Jun 19, 2007


She stood there clutching her favorite blanky, as daddy stormed through the door.

she knew she had done nothing wrong ,but that hadn't stopped him before.

She cowered down to take the blow that this time was too forceful, and as her head lay on the tiles, he felt no remorse at all.

As she arrived at heavens gates, mummy stood there
waiting, no longer was there happiness, daddy's for the taking.

And when god seels daddy's fate they wont be reunited, cause daddy was an evil man and hell just seemed more like him.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jade

    5/5 :(

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxBrOkEnAnGeLxXx

    Thats realli good aye.
    i know people that go thru this kinda stuff and it shouldnt happen. well anyways 5/5 great writing...

  • 16 years ago

    by That One Girl

    Wow....... again im speechless...thats just.......wow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    That was totally awesome , great poem, well written and the flow was good, point made in poem it was good and it gets the readers attention, main things to remember, great job keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    OMG That is amazing...I love it... That's......Wow. 5/5 easy.

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