Fat / Thin x

by Jade Rossiter   Jun 20, 2007


They tell her that she's fat, they tell you that your thin,
But anyways is being fat that much of a bad thing.

They tell her that she's ugly and claim that you're gods gift, And if that's true i don't think god was keen on the receiver, cause everyone knows that true beauty is through the skin much deeper.

Your beauty's on the outside but hers is on the in.
Know tell me who's more beautiful, cause beauty's from within.

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  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Hmm..very intersting, i completely agree with this poem, it is very truthful. good write.

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    "Your beauty's on the outside but hers is on the in.
    Know tell me who's more beautiful, cause beauty's from within."
    ^^^^My Favorite Part

    I Always Get Called Too Thin, And I Hate It Because I'm Happy With Who lam Just Like The Lovely Women Who Have 'Extra Baggage" Are Just Fine With Who They Are Yet Theres Always Someone With a Negative Remark...I Think This Poem Says Alot To Me..And I Love Poetry I Can Relate To...I Don't Know Why I'm The First To Vote This Poem a 5.0...

    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Jade

    I loved it, it's very simple but in away that's good, it gives more of an affect to the poem. It's very meaningful and can be related to by many peopl :)
    I like it alot Keep it up x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    The sentiment here is very good. However, if you're looking for an honest critique the structure of this poem isn't very good and you should perhaps have proof-read it before publishing. This is just my opinion as a fan of traditional poetry and English use, of course.

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