Ghost x

by Jade Rossiter   Jun 20, 2007


I feel like you're watching me and that kinda freaks me out, sometimes i feel your energy and know that you're about.

The strong smell unfamiliar, lingers from time to time, why are you in my bedroom, my bedroom. yes it's mine.

You may have used to live here but that was long ago, ago was in the past and in the past please go.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I really got into this one.
    It was short yeah, but you said all you needed to and it got the point across perfectly.
    I especially loves when you repeated it was your bedroom. Really hit a strong note
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    I Love Poems Like These! Poems With An Exciting Supernatural Twist...I've Had My Share Of Ghostly Encounters And I Must Say The Emotions That You've Displayed Hit It Right On The Nail!! What More Can I Say But 5/5?
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

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