by luv Shelbz luv Jun 21, 2007
category :
Fun, humor /
other
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I'm staring at a blank |
by Chelsey
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It kind of confused me to be honest, but i bet it had good intentions.. |
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It's unique. Some of it I felt was alittle choppy or didn't fit but the last part was deffinetly good. I'll give it a four. |
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It is a bit confusing so it is a fair poem! i liked the ending though you used pretty strong words could be better though good job! |