All the nights

by luv Shelbz luv   Jun 21, 2007


I can't count the number of nights I've thought of you
Staying up all night wondering if you feel the same
I cry thinking of how I don't deserve you
But can't help wanting you anyways
In class instead of at the board I stare at you
Hoping you won't notice

I keep a smile on my face in case you are watching
Watching you flirt with her makes me jealous
I'm like a gardener, but with a green heart
I stay up all night by the phone waiting for your call
And when I realize you won't I cry
Not tears of happiness, but tears of sadness

Writing these poems, hoping you might find them
So finally you'll know how I really feel
Instead of being kept in the dark
I dress my best everyday
Hoping that it'll happen today
You'll realize that we are perfect for each other
And run across the field calling my name
And I the same
We'll meet in the middle with a romantic hug and kiss
With everyone watching and them agreeing

But wait
Let's go back to reality
That this will probably never happen
Unless I tell you how I really feel
but till then I'll stay a far
Gazing at your greatness
And thinking what could be

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    " can't count the number of nights I've thought of you
    Staying up all night wondering if you feel the same
    I cry thinking of how I don't deserve you
    But can't help wanting you anyways
    In class instead of at the board I stare at you
    Hoping you won't notice
    I keep a smile on my face in case you are watching
    Watching you flirt with her makes me jealous

    ^^Doesn't that just make you so mad?!
    omg!
    I hate it when the person I like is flirting with someone else.

    anyways, i Got distracted there, sorry.
    It was a good poem. But I have to say, I do agree with "tears i cry" & "cella Bella" breaking it up a bit would make it easier to read.
    But non the less its a good poem with wonderful flow.
    =]
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    I agree with cella bella it would be better if you broke it up a bit it just easier to read tht way 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Omg!
    This like explain's me perfectly when I was awaiting Jake0.0
    I can't believe how well you captured this. I could never have done it this well.
    It was a pleasure to read, even a little Ironic.

    I really enjoyed it,
    5/5 Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I like that!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good poem but I like the other ones better =) but it's good okay! :)

    I think the flow was okay.. Just a suggestion to add more punctuations =)

    "Watching you flirt with her makes me jealous"
    ^^ I feel the same as you.

    Keep up the good work!

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