Angels Scream Too

by luv Shelbz luv   Jun 22, 2007


I scream as I wake up
From a nightmare
In it he was there
And we weren't together, no love
He was with her
And I cared
I was alone in a world above
You had gotten over me
It was easy to see
No wonder i had died of heartache
I didn't look down with a smiling face
because she had taken over my place
I thought it would be a while before you would date
Why couldn't I see the real you before
I guess I was love struck, and wanting more
You weren't my best friend, and never will
I could've taken him, but too late now
He's got a girl and they are going to vow
You hurt me good, and the pain was intense
You never loved me only my body
i cry and think "if only I could embody"
I am in rage, full of immense
You said you loved me, liar
In my heart there is a burning fire
But wait this isn't a dream, it's reality for me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Its a good poem.
    Really it is.
    I hate writing little short comments.. But there is really only one word to describe it.. "good"! it really is.
    keep it up.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    It was good but like a few other people have said it sounds forced i still gave you 5/5 for trying

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxSurrenderToMyWrathxXx

    ~I like this one!! Great Job!~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    There was some really nice vocab towards the end there. Great emotion here, it made for a wonderful poem.

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Aw so sad.... the title was pretty though. :) 5/5