Gods angel

by WiNgS Of StEeL   Jul 5, 2007


Rest in piece sweet angel
Your time has come.
rest in piece sweet darling,
your spirit filled with love.

Gone to soon, left so early.
filling the hearts with somthing heavy.
though you always said
"do not mourne when i am gone,
for i will be with you, keeping you strong"
Its always easier said then done.

Rest in piece sweet child
your time here has come,
rest in piece sweet darling
your memories shall live on.

Air is the thin line between your world and ours
as we search for a way to end this strife.
your love is the the only thing left behind,
from the short time you had here on earth.

rest in piece sweet child
your time here has come
rest in pice sweet darling
your spirit filled with love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kat

    I really really really really like this quote of yours!

    "In the still of the night, is where dreams come true. In the still of the night is where my heart longs for you.
    always wanting always seeking you. But then again dreams are made to come true."

    It's so good. But anyway, about the poem.... It's really good. It made me feel sad and happy, it was weird. These lines also really hit home....

    "rest in pice sweet darling
    your spirit filled with love."

    Great job again! 5/5!

    ~Kat~

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Emotionally heartfelt.... very touching.

    Just one minor thing, piece should be peace. Other than that it flows nicely and its well written. Its always hard to lose someone, but as you said, memories live on and they are here with you in spirit as well.

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Moving piece there hunni felt like i was in the room with you at one point! really good

    p.s the last line or 2nd from last u spelt piece wrong :) tis the only thing

  • 16 years ago

    by Qpid

    Ow sweety this is rly nice!its so sad but i loved it!..rly 5/5..keep it up babe!

  • 16 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    What a touching....heartfelt piece. Nicely penned.

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