My little friends

by Finalgravedigger   Jul 7, 2007


( Not one of my best but i cant seem to write nature poems)

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My little friends

My little friends
I look and try to mend
the destruction
at hand.

I know I'm one man
but I try my best
I hope yall will
understand.

Ill shoo yall off the road
nurture you as my own
I hope you survive even though
some of you bite.

Yall aren't guilty
I know it's the truth
I look at men as they shoot
sometimes I wanna kill em too.

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  • 16 years ago

    by blueknight

    That was short but still great, i just want to suggest , waht if you rhyme the lasr line with the other line to make it more colorful thats all, by the way great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Oh, I'm sorry- thats not what I meant!
    I just realized that I forgot to finish what I wrote!
    I loved your poem!
    what I meant was
    I wish I could make the world better for 'them'
    lol Im sorry!

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow!! nice
    u can indeed write nature poems :)

  • 16 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Thanks for ur comment, its a cute poem, like the moral of it :) keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Thanks for the comment on my new poem
    its finished now-
    I think you did well on this poem
    I wish I could make it better-
    oh, thats part of the new poem I just wrote
    I was in a hurry, you see, so it wasnt all that clear,
    but thank you very much for the 5!

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