by Nil   Jul 13, 2007

I've tired so hard to stand on my own
But I've grown so weak
and my weakness shows
You can see the smile die in my eyes
Whenever you look my way
You can hear my faint breath
The ones you used to take away

You know a part of me dies
Every time you bring her around
Holding her close, you must love her smell
Everything about her screams perfect
There aren't any marks on her skin
You once told me flaws were beautiful
Now they are nothing more than mistakes


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  • 4 years ago

    by Glenn G

    Beautiful. But somewhat sad once, I was very much in love with a woman I know was meant for me. At the time I was a terrible introvert and a few years later she died.

  • 9 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Real good poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by don

    Heartfelt write , can relate, love is a killer


  • 15 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
    Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Gorgeous poem
    it must suck what ur going thru
    u can PM me wenever u wants
    and keep it up
    wonderful 5/5


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