Take a slice at her vein

by Michelle18   Jul 14, 2007


She cuts herself one more time,
just like she did everyday before.
she cuts up her arm in a straight line,
so deep that the blood quickly begins to pour.
she cries all the time,
but that never stops the pain.
so she finally decides,
to take a slice at her vein.
tears fall down,
as she screams for help.
she knows she just made a mistake,
and that she's going to hell.
she stares at her wrist,
no one is around.
she slices it again and again,
and finally collapses to the ground.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Another suicide poem..
    Seriously if you need to talk I'm more than willing to listen.

    Anayways, I though it was very simple. Another straight to the point easy to read poem. I loved poems like that. Great job!

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Thats a kind of sad-dark poem. it flows nicely with the words and the discription has lacked a little but i still like it. 5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by LovelyDivine

    Again, great work.
    sad subject, but I've written about things like that also.
    keep up the great work.
    keep your head up. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LovexMe

    OMFG. i love it.
    i love how it ends,
    "no one is around.
    she slices it again and again,
    and finally collapses to the ground. "
    mind if i add it to my favourites?

    --Trinity
    5/5

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow O_O that is really strong. *tragic cough. xD*

    Anyway I really like the way it ended.. It shows the emotions in this poem, well done.

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