Dreaming

by my name is Llama   Jul 15, 2007


My head touches the pillow, my eyes begin the close
I enter into a world of magic in which I compose

In my dreams I can be anyone and anything I desire
A princess with her prince in illustrious attire

I have a tea party with dolphins under the sea
I fight in great battles alongside a banshee

But as the sun begins to rise and shine down upon me
I know that I was just dreaming and I'm no longer free

So back to reality until night beckons me once more
I can't wait to close my eyes and continue to explore

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  • 16 years ago

    by Oscar

    Oooh i had to reread this poem because i loved it so much. it was really well written, rhymed, and delivered. this is definately one of my favorites from yours so far.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    In my opinion that was absolutely fantastic when i read it without the 3rd stanza but the 3rd needs to be changed i think but apart from that the rhyimg, the style and the wording was all really good top marks :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Wow. This poem is simple yet really great. It was origional, and detailed, and very cute. =) the flow was excellent and the word choice was amazing.

    In my dreams I can be anyone and anything I desire
    A princess with her prince in illustrious attire
    Those were my favorite lines!!

    Greast poem!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by X2892

    Well written poem, i like it a lot, also it gets a 5/5 :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the imagery in the poem, I also like the rhyming of the poem, well done. I like your dream xD Could you please write a second part of this poem xD

    5/5!