Requiem For Redemption.

by Teria   Jul 17, 2007


Requiem For Redemption.

As far as the seas,
fallen from heaven.
As wide as the land,
and continents of seven.
As much as you had,
you still wanted more..
The heart of a woman,
who's selfishly tore.
It's never enough,
to have what you need..
It's never enough,
for it's all what you feed..

Feed to each soul,
and sing to each heart.
The song of love,
and never falling apart.
Thy God of heaven,
Thy God of hell,
it's not enough,
he needs the one's that's fell.
He's awaiting each soul,
to bring back home;
Requiem for redemption,
is all we need to never be alone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    All your poems are so beautifully penned and again you have acomplished such a diamond of a piece. I can't resist ading you too my favorites after reading just a few of your pieces. The emotions captured within this were great. Definitly strong, powerful and heartfelt. Not much more I can say about this gorgeous poem. Keep up the great work.~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    The flow was smooth&effortless.Very easy to understand.Great work.5/5

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    What a beautifuly penned poem. out of th other two that i have also read of your this one is by far the best for me, i think it was because your rhyming scheme was easier to comprehend, and thereflow it gave your flow much more rhythem. I also love the way that you portrayed life, and how you gave inspiration through your words. Your opening stanza was perfect, and really captures the reader to continue to the second stana! really well written with a flawless flow, like your others; a 5/5 from me
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  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Oh, very nice. The flow in this piece was excellent.

    Very nicely penned.

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