The only thing left

by HaileyHelen   Jul 19, 2007


Another little soul
Taken from its mother
Another little baby
that will never become a loving brother

The fact of it is
He was gonna be
my little cousin
now he's gonna be
one of many dozen

another tear
that falls from my cheek
another crack
that makes my heart so weak

The fact of it is
I loved him to death
it kills me to know that
i wont be able to see
his first steps!

another reason
i wish to say good bye
he's not just another reason
tears fall from my eyes

the fact of it is
he'll never have a breath
and it hurts me inside
the knowledge that
he was the only thing left!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ BACKROUND!!! i just found out that mii auntie had a miscarriage!! and i was so looking forward 2 having a new lil baby in the fam!!!! i was gunna babysit and he was gunna b come mine!hehe*tear!*um... but yea this was really hard 2 write but yea if u think it sux tell me cuz its in his honor so i'd apreciate 2 no if i needed 2 change anything!thanx!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    Hey im here if anythings wrong ; )
    but great poem its sad because its true but it was realy good

  • 18 years ago

    by teryn

    Im sorry to hear about the miscarriage.

    i have a baby cousin & he is my little boy. i dont know what i would do if he was a miscarriage. so i know where you are so sad!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Awe dear. this poem caught my heart. its amazing and i love you ( L )

    one line though...
    that will never become a baby brother....
    i think baby throws it off seeing as you have it written a few lines above. say the stanza with the baby brother. then just with brother and you choose what you like better...

    and you have a few spelling errors as well. but thats all. !! i loved this poem. i want to cry right now ( L ) love you dear.

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