by Rose not your average Jul 19, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
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He sits there, cold. |
by Miranda
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Very sad but beautiful poem.It's a nice way to bring attention to a issue such as children like the one in this poem. 5/5 |
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Seems a little forced on the rhyming. kinda sad but in a good way. good job! |
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That's a well written poem, but it makes me sad:( |
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Great poem very sad tho ='( |