Fight 4

by Finalgravedigger   Jul 20, 2007


Fight 4
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By finalgravedigger edited by debblyn

Tables are turning
Life's fire is burning
Smoke reaches my eyes
Feelings cry out inside

Smog is blinding
Life's grill is grinding
Pain's tearing me down
I'm falling in and out

Willing to give up my life
Screaming, I gripe
Then thinking why?
I'm going to fight

I can change my life
Many chances to find
Life has a light
Burning so bright

Learning and moving on
Doing the best for myself
I'm living on.

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  • 16 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    If life has a light that is burning so bright... I think it needs a new bulb, because it has been going out lately and I can't see.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Gooood. i like.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Fantastico!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Taz

    Omg now thats a good poem worth 5/5 for shore i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Nicely put!
    "I can change my life
    Many chances to find"
    These I liked the most. 5/5

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