Fighting Back

by *Charisma*   Jul 22, 2007


The chaos rattles in my head
Shakes up my broken heart
The million pieces it's still in
Continue to fall apart.

Each phone call I don't get
And hug that I'm not in
Lingers in my eardrums
Crawls across my skin.

The words I didn't say
And the ones that I have said
Will never be enough
To gain me sleep in bed.

Sanity escapes me
It left with my last hope
Wherever it has wandered
It took my will to cope.

Needing you was hard
Not getting you...pure pain
Dealing with it now
Is driving me insane.

This wasn't what I planned
And I don't know how to act.
I'm fighting with emotions
That just keep fighting back.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Ok I love the second verse and the last couple lines. I love poems that incorporate the title within one of the verses, especially one at the end to round it out and bring it back to meet itself so that it makes a lot of sense. And in the second verse, I think that style was very interesting. I really like how you tied the third line back to the first and the forth line to the second. Very intersting. Don't know why it caught my attention like it did but I really like it. :) 5/5 as always!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Let te emotions through and deal witthem xxxx hope all is ok xx good work xxxxxxxxx