Emo tear

by Rose not your average   Jul 27, 2007


Dressed in black,
Possibly smoking crack.
Wearing their eyeliner.
Sitting in the back,
With all there problems.
They say there depressed.
And you see that emo tear.
They feel a spear,
Stab through there heart!
Its black,
Running down there face,
Almost like they are bleeding.
They sit there in the dark.
With that knife,
And that one emo tear.
They seem never happy,
They just sit there with something unsaid.
They hold their secrets tight.
And let that tear fall.
Fall onto the scars,
Fall onto the ground.
Thinking its gone,
But they just keep coming.
Its the emo tear.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Ooo! its beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it its going on my favs!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    I didn't really like the repetition of "emo tear" it was abit out of place but good job though. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow..thats like a bundle of emotins cranked up together. n suddenly exploding .. loved it .. i really like the feel of the poem.. well expressed .. Keep up the brilliant work.

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by ShootingStar

    5/5
    when you describe the emo's outwear.you're so true. totally agree wif you: )

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    THis is a good poem and the word choice is also good. You need to work on this poem to make it better. To start lets correct these mistakes

    With all there(their) problems.
    They say there(they are) depressed.
    Stab through there(their) heart!

    Keep writing
    Fsams

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