My nightmare

by Rose not your average   Jul 28, 2007


Everything is dark,
All you here is a bark.
It is a nightmare.

Then something hits you,
It was something huge.
It is a nightmare.

You feel a knife,
Knowing it may take your life.
It is a nightmare.

You feel it stabbing your flesh.
And feel your blood, its fresh.
It is a nightmare.

You here its bloody voice,
You cannot rejoice.
It is a nightmare.

You see its face,
Then you are in a chase.
It is a nightmare.

But all I can think of,
Is the person face!
It is a nightmare.

The eyes that kill,
It gives me a chill.
It is a nightmare.

The lips that pierce your skin,
I know he will win.
It is a nightmare.

I feel his cold hands,
There like wristbands.
It is a nightmare.

They rap around my neck,
And I turn into a reck.
It is a nightmare
I gasp for air,
I send up a prayer,
It is a nightmare.

I know this is the final moments of my life,
As I feel that knife.
It is a nightmare.

I cannot speak,
I feel so weak.
It is a nightmare.

Then I am in my bed,
I am not dead.
It was a nightmare

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Imagery of this piece is great. Atmosphere is haunting and topic is interesting. Fifth stanza is incredibly written. Flow of this poem is excellent.
    The lips that pierce your skin,
    I know he will win.
    It is a nightmare.
    ^This is my favorite part of this piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Cool that is so creepy and cool. I love it very much. I like how u keep saying It's a nightmare! Its soo neat!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "Then I am in my bed,
    I am not dead.
    It was a nightmare"

    That was excellently written..very chilling and it really hit a nerve with me..
    Great layout!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    I think you meant "hear". Nonetheless the poem was great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is simple and sweet. The rhymes are perfect and the structure is beautiful. I loved the way words strung each other and the repetitive function is clear. 5/5 all the way

    Fsams

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