by Rose not your average Jul 28, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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Everything is dark, |
by Nix
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Imagery of this piece is great. Atmosphere is haunting and topic is interesting. Fifth stanza is incredibly written. Flow of this poem is excellent. |
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Cool that is so creepy and cool. I love it very much. I like how u keep saying It's a nightmare! Its soo neat! |
by Gem
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"Then I am in my bed, |
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I think you meant "hear". Nonetheless the poem was great. |
by Fsams
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Wow this is simple and sweet. The rhymes are perfect and the structure is beautiful. I loved the way words strung each other and the repetitive function is clear. 5/5 all the way |