by Independence Forever Jul 29, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
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I know a maid who never was right |
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Aww i think this is very cute aww and i like the dedication |
by Gasttlee
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Wow! powerful and deep! 5/5 |
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I say get rid of that thorn in ur side. |
by Marc Ortiz
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And last change the title to.. |
by Marc Ortiz
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It was a great poem.. It flowed well, good job! I like the way you rhymed some lines, keep it up. |