Last resort

by Rose not your average   Jul 31, 2007


I have caused to much hurt,
I made you feel like dirt!
I screwed up,
One to many times.
I feel so lost,
I made you pay a cost.
I am sorry,
But its my last resort!
Maybe its best!
To start fresh.
Ill pack my bags,
And get up an Ill leave.
Please do not grieve.
It really is my last resort!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    It is a sad poem, but it's brilliantly done. I quite like the idea of the poem and the title was very...I don't know how to say it. It just captured my attention.

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Another sad one. I know how it feels to want to leave after something like that happens. Grea job with this one.
    5/5
    Ciao

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very cleaver twist in this poem and its all good

  • 16 years ago

    by blueknight

    Um I love the concept of the poem it is short and well penned just a quick suggestion dont repeat the word trice maybe you can repeat it twice but not trice,

    thats all buts it is good

    Gene Ross

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