Why wont

by HaileyHelen   Aug 2, 2007


Screaming so loud!
Why cant you hear me?
Do the cuts make you proud?
Why cant you see me?

Letting the hopes be shattered!
Letting the hearts be crushed!
Letting myself be battered!
And the screams of my tears be hushed!

Hurting so much!
Why can't you stop it?
Do i have to die for one touch?
Why dont you love me; even a little bit?

Letting my wounds reopen!
Letting my sheild go down!
Letting my feelings be spoken!
And getting my life turned around!

Hearing my prayers!
Why dont't you answer?
Does any one care?
Why wont anyone answer?

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this was absolutely amazing. I felt like this at some point. I hate being ignored because it's the most aweful thing in the world. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Wow, that one is awesome. it just simply flowed off of my tounge. there were no flaws in its flow. its rythm was spot on too. wonderful job. 7/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Someone who listens

    Hi,
    I like your poems in some way it relates to what im going through

    Peace

  • 16 years ago

    by teryn

    Awwe. so much emotion. i love it. AWESOME!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    It's a painful poem ??
    good job

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