Picture Day

by luv Shelbz luv   Aug 3, 2007


I stand in line on this day
To have my picture taken
I am not having a picture perfect way

Now it is my turn
After my long wait
I fake a smile and move on

I am sad and side
As many can see
Because of the tear, stained eyes

My mascara has run
Run away from my eyes
My make-up is ruined which isn't a surprise

That was my last picture
Forever and today
I go home and there I stay
in the blood stained sheets

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    That was a very sad poem.
    But it was also very good, I do agre with Crystal Gaze though, when she said "I think you could expand on it a little more, maybe breach why she is killing herself on picture day"
    ^^I agree with that statement.
    But non the less. it was a good poem.
    and nice writer.
    keep it up.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    It flowed really nicely.
    And it was definitly interesting.
    I think you could expand on it a little more, maybe breach why she is killing herself on picture day. Just a suggestion.

    I really liked it though.
    Keep it up.
    5/5 Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Interesting....i like that on alot to

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