Thief in the night

by Rose not your average   Aug 6, 2007


It is completely silent,
But something is violent.
There is only a few lights,
And soon there may be a fight.
Nobody is out,
Except one.
All dressed in black,
Creeping along in the shadows,
Trying not to be seen,
Seen by who?
There is nobody out.
He creeps up to a door,
Somehow unlocking it.
And steps inside.
Takes what he wants
And leaves.
He is the thief in the night.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is excellently written. Imagery is superb and atmosphere of this piece is amazingly haunting. I really like it, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Wow... it so wonderful... although it written as dark poem... but its very good...

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well you should put this one to into stanzas =) but anyway it was a good poem, using the last words as the title is really effective, well done. I think you can improve this poem - I know coz you're a good writer.

    Kepe up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Oh scary! That was great imagery! I was watching that man creep around in the dark. Oh gives me chills! The idea is original too. Ive never read about a theif...its awesome! Great job!

    ~Morgan~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    It started off rhyming and then it seems you changed your mind lol. It was unique though and I did enjoy the read. It was kind of mysterious. Nice job. 4/5

    marcella

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