No such thing as the perfect world

by Rose not your average   Aug 10, 2007


I thought my life was perfect,
Well pretty close.
Then you started wanting into my life
When you never wanted much to do with me.

Then you flipped my whole world around!
Making me feel like a quitter.
Making me feel lost.
You just have to be in control.

Well guess what?
You cannot control me.
I will live my life,
Not the way you want me to live!

I know I am good enough,
I know I am not a quitter!
I know I am a good person,
And you cannot worsen!

You are the cause of my pain,
And it is just a stupid game!
Why do you play it?
Well guess what!

I can play mind games to,
You are not the only one!
There is someone else,
Meet your match!

You make me cry,
But it makes me stronger.
This isnt a position you want to be in,
Why do you do it?

Do you get pleasure in mental torture?
To you get pleasure in telling lies.
Pouring them on?
How doe sit feel?

Welcome to this world,
This none perfect world,
Were you can only get what you want,
When you fight

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karin Erlacher

    I hate poems like this.. not because of how you wrote it or anything.. but because it's something that totally could be dedicated to me.

    It's well written.. I like it alot.

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Im guessing that was a poem to say a **c* you to someone! nice wording

    one thing though..
    You cannot control me.
    I will live my life,
    Not hat you want me to live
    you spelt that wrong lol

    nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Very strong poem...i like it... although there are a few typos in this one. but still i give you a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by vampy

    Great poem! it reminds me of some ppl

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is such a heartfelt poem and the wordings are really straightforward and powerful. I love the content of this piece. Well done

    tc
    Fsams

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