by the come back Aug 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
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Every song you sing, |
by azii
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Nicely done. I like it. But try to fix the typos, and it'd be great. |
by Jenni Marie
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"Please love me too |
by lish
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I love this one do damn much |
by patriscia
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Hmmm...nice poem...inlove????you are good in writing...ahhmm..by the way thanx for your comments.....hmmmmm....im speechless... |
by Nix
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First stanza is great but I don't like second one. You expressed emotions greatly but you repeated word-sing- too many times. |