This boy

by Rose not your average   Aug 11, 2007


I know I have not seen you in a while.
But that day when I looked you in the eyes,
I did not know what to think.
I was at loss of breath.

I wish I could talk to you,
But I am too afraid.
You use to always make me laugh,
You seem so easy to talk to.

I don’t know what to think,
You make me feel something,
That I can’t explain.
I have never felt this way before.

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  • 18 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Short sweet and too the point well done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by jyzka

    It's a nice poem..
    keep it up!!
    :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by vampy

    Nice poem...sometimes i feel like that lol...great poem =^^=

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    Pretty good. It felt a little ackward, but I think that's what you were trying to portray. A few grammarical issues, but nothing huge. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Wow..This poem had so much emotion in it..You could just tell that you were trying to get it all out...

    I loved this whole thing, It was written so beautifully..

    Great Job... 5/5

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