Crack my code

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Aug 12, 2007


I don't know if I'm losing it
or if i got nothing to lose
i don't know but mind battering thoughts
have left me with a bruise

should i let my words escape from my mouth
without any loss of thought
or should i ponder the meaning of
happiness cant be bought

life was so much easier
when you explained it
but since you... my heart is gone
I'm trying to figure out how i obtained it

if you can figure out this cryptic message
then relieve me of this bruise
explain to me how
your the only thing that i have to lose

P.S i just wrote how i felt about some one special and it came out like this if you can understand it then let me know what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    I think i know what are u talking about, i got a little bit the same feeling....i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by browneyezz

    I think i no what ur talking about this is a great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by XdangerouslyXgenuineX

    Wow this is amazing, i dont think i have ever expressed myself like that in a poem before but that is really based off of what people think. really though this is a very good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Whats funny is as i read that i had a song playing if i aint got you lol weird huh but nice work mate :)