Falling

by CODACHROME   Aug 15, 2007


Falling isn't a word its an action
Like wen people say I'm falling in love
Its just the minor attraction
I fell for u and i lost
I fell for you and i faced the cost
I fell for u now I'm broken
i fell for you now I'm spoken
This is the reason falling ain't a a word its an action
like wen people say I'm in love
its only the minor attraction

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The word chice was simple yet effective, and the message was clear, try stepping up the vocab in short poems to add more power and emtion, and You should write words out (u=you) it makes your poem look more professional. I hope my comment isnt harsh just trying to help, over all 4/5 you did a good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Awesome poem!! hey candy left a comment before i did. lol well your poem was awesome good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion

    Hey this is really good, i like it.

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