Twist Tie Torment

by Finalgravedigger   Aug 19, 2007


Twist my lifes thread
dont let me go to bed
spin me around
and give me a frown.

Tie my heart in knots
give me terrible thoughts
show that horrible plot
in the end I know is dark.

Torment my mind
no longer can I hide
I may not be fine
but there is no line.

I still want you
will always love you
no matter what you do
Im here for you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JaM

    This is quite an interesting piece of art work. Full of emotion, and direct. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    This piticular poem reminds me of my sisters work, good but i think you could of done better(no offence but compared to your other work) ^.^

    -Ashley

  • 16 years ago

    by Cooper

    12 comments? Wow, nice. I guess that makes sense with this nice piece of poetry you've got here. I mean, not the most amazing thing in the world, but you've got talent, and definitely heart.
    So...keep it up. Or some other cliche people say in comments.

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Great job..keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    That was a very good poem ,and well written, yet it's so true to many , we all fall for that special someone and no end to what we put ourselves through all for the name of love , great write ,,, keep it up ,,,,your friend Tracy d.............5/5

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