Ocean waves (collab)

by Finalgravedigger   Aug 25, 2007


Ocean waves (collab)
by Finalgravedigger
and Matunus

Ocean waves call to me,
moonlight guiding my path.
The waves wash my footprints,
erasing all the tracks.

My past is behind
the beach is so fine
I understand to start a new
Ill see it through.

Waves moving for wars,
gently moving in and out.
Afriad what lies before me,
Will I sink and drown?

Swimming on top
of all of this salt
relaxing and swimming
I'm not going to be at fault.

The night hides the ocean's mystery,
unable to see what lies ahead.
The salt burns the cuts and wounds,s
they were deeper than I had expect.

Slowly the wounds heal
with the sea
burning for a moment
I no longer bleed.

he marks made so long ago,
finally mended and concealed.
Ocean waves soflty caring me,
she waits for me to feel.

The oceans cry but know
I wont die
Ill try with all my might
and follow the moonlight.

Finalgravedigger: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=96605

Matunus:http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=264277

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow!!! Incredible poem, it has so powerful atmosphere and rhythm of whole piece is simply amazing. I love this one, it has some breathtaking lines, very deep. Congrats to both of you, well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ocean Soul

    I really love it. Excellent!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    I love it. It's very very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    An absolut beauty .. i must say.. u guys did a remarkable job. really touching and i did find hope in there.. amazing work..
    Loved the wpoem,,esp. this stanza..

    "..The night hides the ocean's mystery,
    unable to see what lies ahead.
    The salt burns the cuts and wounds,s
    they were deeper than I had expect.."

    and

    "..Slowly the wounds heal
    with the sea
    burning for a moment
    I no longer bleed.."

    brilliant.. keep it up

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    A very beautiful poem! Good job.