by lish Aug 27, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
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My name is Hakim Jamil |
by unknown
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Wonderful piece.. The emotion very strong and powerful. It's one of the best story about life i've ever read.. It flowed very well too.. And three last stanzas,, it was a great ending for your poem.. |
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Wow, great story. I can really relate to it!!! |
by azii
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I'M TOTALLY SPEECHLESS THIS POEM IS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVEIT!!!!! SO MEANINGFULL AND .. JUST GREAT!!! IT'S ON MY FAVS AND YOUR ONM MY FAVS I REALLY ENJOY READING YOU RWORK CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
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Hhmmm. did you write this all yourself. or were those words from someone else (the stuff about jamil)? i really liked this. |
by Spirit
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